Fixing Spider-Man comics (ASM)

I want to get your oppinion on my idea of how I would fix ASM comics if I was the writer. It would be 12 issues to fix and the rest would be a normal run.

Please give what you think I could do better and stay respectfull

This is the first Issue and I will give the second issue another day (hopefully tomorrow), I cannot even write both of these issues without passing the characters limits on Anon Babble

The first issue would be called: Peter Parker no more, and it would start with aunth may getting murdered by an unknown shooter and Peter being devastated. We would see her funeral where people close to Peter (like Harry osborn, Flash tompson and MJ (There is more but they are the most importants but Paul isn’t even here)) and as each of them give their condolence to Peter, he just ignore them. We then would have a time skip of a few months and we would see a Peter that just is Spider-Man all day long and that isolated himself from everyone. Spider-Man would still be goofy but he would be a bit more brutal and more effective. We then would see Peter being confronted by the Human torch that would just see of he is fine and Peter will act fine but he would later take off his mask and we would see him crying. The issue would then cut to mysterio having an argument with someone about how they went too far with making Peter’s life miserable (the argument would reveal that they are behind OMD, superior Spider-Man, Jackpot and a bunch of other shit story that happened after OMD) we then would see that the man mysterio is talking to is Paul

If you have questions or things that I could improve please say it and I will try to answer the questions (I am sorry if I miss your question) and I will take note of the commentary and try to include them in future issues or remembering it to make them in this issue if I ever get to write an ASM run

It would be 12 issues to fix

That's already too many.

Just be grateful for Hickman's Ultimate.

12 issues set 10 years into the future, Peter is retiring, all the other 30 Spidey legacy heroes die in a tragic fire, The End.

I am asking for constructive critisism, not for just shitting on what I think would fix ASM comics, it’s just the first issue, I already have a lot more of other issues (not exactly 12 but 12 is a safe number)

I am very grateful for it, in fact it is the only thing stopping me from being depressed right now

It’s just a safe number, maybe it would be less, I have a big plot for the first 3 and the last 3 but I am trying to think for the in between

just retcon everything bro

mysterio bro, my all fix get out of jai lcard

let's shit on paul bro, that will fix things

thank God you'll never be hired by Marvel, I mean there are some absolute retards working there but you certainly aren't too far from them

That is just the first issue, it’s meant to introduce a lot of things that will be important later on, the next issues stories will be more clear and also I am just sharing a rough summary of the story, but I intead to make things work and show more of what is going in inside the heads of the characters and give them dialogue that show the state they are in. I am trying to make this a thing about how Peter is at his lowest and he slowly get back up to his highest.

It turns out MJ has been a skrull since before Paul was introduced. He goes to outerspace to save her.