Fixing Spider-Man comics (ASM) part 2

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Fixing Spider-Man comics (ASM) part 2

If you already saw the first thread about fixing Spider-Man comics, I present the second issue of my theoretical run that could fix Spider-Man (in my oppinion)

The second issue would start with how Paul and Mysterio made OMD with Mysterio’s illusion and a memory remover gaz; but we would see that it didn’t work on Peter and that he still remember the marriage and kept the wedding photo in his appartment and has been trying to find who’s behind OMD. We then would cut to present day where Peter is swingning through the city and we will see MJ as jackpot (or venom or whatever bullshit it will be at the time I would manage to being hired by Marvel to write ASM comics) fighting crimes until her powers suddenly stop working while she is mid air, Peter would save her and put her on the ground. As Peter try to immediately leave, MJ stop him and try to reason with him about how he just became full Spider-Man and no Peter Parker. Peter would then tell her to return to Paul in a way that show his distain to Paul but MJ would reveal that Paul is abusive and that she can’t just go home so Peter will reluctently agree to let her stay at his appartment (that he is almost never in anyway). We than would cut to a thought monologue from MJ that explain that she still love Peter and that she was with Paul because he threatened her to kill everyone she care about and to make things that would make Peter go full Back in Black mode and that she didn’t spent five years in the dilmension with Paul but Paul forced her to act as if she did. We would learn about how much she regret this and how she hate Paul but have to act as if she love him. We than would cut to Peter fighting Doc Oc because he is doing some random crime and we would see in that fight how Peter does his best to hold back his punch and not do something horrible (he is like that because of the revelation of abusive Paul and his aunt’s death).

The issue would end with Peter going back to his appartment to sleep but Paul is at his door for MJ to go back to him and they have a Small confrontation that end with Peter saying to Paul that he isn’t welcome to his appartment at all Paul would then leave while doing a call (to mysterio but Peter won’t know it)

Please only ask question or say what you would do instead and please stay respectful (last time it had too much people that were just insulting my idea and I don’t want that again) so if you want to insult or have a unnecessary commentary, keep it to yourself

Why make a whole other thread instead of using the other one?

last time it had too much people that were just insulting my idea and I don’t want that again

If your idea sucks, it sucks. Quit being a bitch and grow some thicker skin.

To avoid it being archived too soon

If you don’t want to be constructive, fuck off

Then post it in the first one then.

And by the way in the time skip in between aunt may’s death and now, Peter broke up with whoever he would be dating at the time (if he isn’t single)

What is there to be constructive about? This reads like a 13 year old wrote it. It's basic bitch fanfiction quality. Try again.

The first one will be archived pretty soon and I post one per day and I know that the first one won’t last 12 days

OP is flabbergasted that anons on Anon Babble are not exactly doing what OP dictates them to do

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If you don’t like it, leave. If you think you could give ideas that could help, feel free to share but if you don’t, just fuck off

I am not flabbergasted, just tired

Bro, not everyone's gonna like what you write. The people giving constructive criticism will not always do it because they like your story but feel it needs some tweaks, but also because the story could be shit but they'll help you improve so it's no longer shit. Get the picture?

And what did you offer to improve except saying that it is shit?

Well I think the reason you made this thread is that you're being emotional/tired and the previous thread has that schizo in there. They're gonna show up no matter what because jannies are retarded and either don't ban them or they are just very persistent losers but jannies will also kill a spidey thread if there are too many of them which is understandable. Plus if you want criticism most anons will only dole it out once in a while since they want to have their turn at making threads or just don't want to be spammed with threads and most anons don't write that much criticism because it takes a lot of effort anyway. Also Anon Babble just is naturally always going to have one anon who just says it's shit and leaves. If you get mad at that, then you don't really understand Anon Babble. Once that happens everybody's just gonna dogpile on you because it's fun which I won't deny. But also that leads to anons thinking you're doing it intentionally which leads them to think you're running an anti-marriage psyop by pretending to be dense and portraying other anti-marriage anons in a bad light. Seems like a Slott move. Not saying you are but that whole idea seems like what he would do.

I just want to find some sane person that can have constructive critisism and not only have to deal with some trolls, that’s all.

Jesus, what the fuck is this bullshit.

Going to ask again, why Paul?

It’s clear you have a raging hate-boner for him.

So clear that you’re ignoring things that have been brought up in the past thread and will continue to do so. Unless it’s something to align with your precious image of Spider-Man.

Things you’ve established

1. You insist on Spider-Man being “Street-Level” whatever the fuck that means?

2. You don’t like it when Spider-Man is on magical or cosmic adventures

3. You think the John Romita Sr days where the best and where Spider-Man should go back to.

It’s clear that what your selling no one here wants to buy it.

Dude, do you even know where you are?

That’s like asking for a clean drink from water from a septic tank.

You want constructive criticism then ask your friends and family them again from what I’ve seen it’s clear you only want people here to validate your writing.

My advice.

Actually write out this fanfic of yours and yes it is a fanfic. Post it on a fanfic board like AO3 and you’ll probably get a better response. Not saying that it will be folks screaming that you wrote a masterpiece but at least they can’t hide behind a mask of anonymity

I am actually planning to change one thing for the third one. I am just saying what I think would fix ASM comics, you are not forced to like it but I will still continue putting my idea because I just want to share my idea that is just my oppinion, no need to like it but please let me show my ideas

I know it is but it would be what I would do if I get my hands on ASM comics and I also want to hide behind anonymity

You can do the same on forums and fanfic sites.

Just create a throwaway email account and create some random account on a Spider-Man forum or Fanfic site and problem.

This is probably the closest to friendly advice you’ll get around here.

It seems like you’re passionate about this and I get it. We all have things we’re passionate about but you’re literally posting this on the wrong site.

Now you say you want to use this site because you don’t want Disney/Marvel to come after you and want to remain anonymous.

Trust me, they’re not going to come after you if you do the same thing on fanfic or spider man fan sites.

They’ll only come after you if your try and make a profit. For example, charging people to read your Spider-Man fanfic or do something like write a story where Spider-Man is a child rapist and mass publish it.

Look Anon Babble is not a place to share ideas unless it’s about tits, ass, cocks and faggotry.

Asking for respect and constructive feedback here is just asking to be kicked in the nuts with a steel-toe boot. It’s not going to happen.

Unless that’s your thing then that’s something completely different

I guess that I am gonna keep the rest to myself but thanks for the advice

Not that anon, but in addition to this Reddit spacing post, even though Anon Babble is mostly a news, storytime, and porn website with some good quality threads once in a while, there is still capacity to get some good constructive criticism once in a while. But only in those good threads. Anon Babble has changed a lot but what you expect out of this website isn't really feasible for a writer to continually get the feedback needed to make a good story. At least not at the timetable needed to become good in a reasonable time frame.
Oh ok, lol. I was writing the above stuff before this. But yeah don't get discouraged. By the time you get good, Spider-Man may be totally irrelevant and comics might not exist. But that's their fault. If they do still exist then the satisfaction will be even sweeter once the character is revitalized and all of them who did this are condemned and languish into obscurity or go crazy from their work being derided as slop like Slott himself. That's all uncertain but in the process at least you can create shit that is of your own design. The reason I'm saying this is because I too wish to get good at writing and take over Spider-Man. But there are many disappointments in life and much uncertainty. That's why I daydream about my own unique stories and characters to hopefully make into my own series.

Thanks

Why fix it when you can accelerate the collapse?

Go fuck yourself

he wouldn't destroy the world just because he thinks it'll make a funny sound

Come on. Burn it all down. It'll be fun.

If you kill me, I win, because it means I pissed you off that much. And now we both know it.

Do you really want to win?

There isn't a single outcome to this where I DON'T win. Either you kill me, which means I really pissed you off, or you don't kill me, which means I'm free to piss you off some more.

Look at your door

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I guess the jannies don't like it when you make death threats.

Yeah right, like you can move that fast. I bet you break a sweat standing perfectly still.

I deleted it myself

Because you realized how stupid it is to threaten someone when you don't know who or where they are?

Just go look at your door

Yes

No. Tell you what, prove that you're not bluffing by ringing my doorbell to the tune of Shave and a Haircut. You've got five minutes. I'll be waiting to laugh at you.

Well, at least you're just barely smart enough to realize how stupid you are. Some people aren't even that smart.

At least you’re smart enough to not fall for it

Some of us know when we make mistakes

And I'm not stupid enough to threaten an anonymous person in an unknown location. So I guess that means I'm the smartest person in this thread. The bar wasn't set very high.

See what? You finally learning how to tie your shoes?

He'd have to because that's the only way editorial would allow it. That's what would be needed to justify a reboot